This looks a little…. 50 Shades of Grey? I suppose I could tint it a different color. I liked the idea of the rumpled blanket looking like a landscape and you don’t realize it’s a bed until you look at the top.
My second attempt is a little better, although it falls into the category of girls in fancy dresses who look like they’re dead:
I think the title indicates that the girl is not in fact dead but sleeping… Maybe this orientation is better? Less dead-looking?
Ideally, I’d love an action shot of a model who looks like Kayla – lighter colored hair. Some kind of forest where she’s nearly hidden, crouched and ready to pounce. But I couldn’t find any stock photos like that 😦